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Cruelty,
Is the art of pain
The hurt was burned
The ash remained
Love me
If you can never love

Cruelty
Whenever I go
I find people I love
When I just leave
It hurts me ,to find that
They are gone

Cruelty
The bus is taking
Children, elder, old
I m just waiting
And looking at my watch
The bus station
Is always full with them
And me
so when its going to be!?

Cruelty
You never see a bad guy ,
Without a painful past
Or a girl that run from love
So fast
Without being hurt
Because simply
Cruelty is nothing
But the chains
cruelty
How do we put salt
On our wounds to taste
The agony
And then we just scream
Our hearts out and cry
They say its love
And tormenting is never a
Dream


Tuck me in the bed
Do you see ,
How lost I m
How childish I look
Because
Cruelty
Didn’t leave anything
But regrets
I laugh so hard when they say ,move on ,
Forget
For thee
Cruelty is nothing
But the art of pain
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's sort of choppy!. it doesn't flow really well but there are a few really deep lines!. my absolute favorite was the last 2 lines where you were like Cruelty is nothing but the art of pain!. i don't know why but that just hit me!. it made me feel something from the truthness of that!. all together it's ok but not a robert frost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com