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Wisdom Comes With Age

Rose declared to me that night that wisdom comes with age
and my advancing years should bring no fear!.
But now, in doubt and shame, I pass another wasted day
and in self-pity, waste another year!.

I sometimes sit at home alone because I’m conscious of
my old and introverted self!. I find
when everybody gravitates into their little cliques
I’m usually the only one in mine!

I reinforce my insecurities by dwelling on
these things!. I see the young and pretty ones
and in my lonely heart, and in my body, agonize
because I know that I’m no longer young

or anything approaching handsome!. Thinking of a time
when I was the life of every party;
I mourn those times; I know that they have long-since passed away
into the misty realm of memory!.

And she, whose eyes, uncharmed by any pretense of desire,
look upon me, if they look at all,
with a fleeting and indifferent glance, politely nods
and passes, barely noticing!. This small

and subtle gesture of superiority could not
have hurt me more!. I’ve lost the fight; I’ve slain
my final dragon!. Tired and bitter, I must be resigned
to celibacy, solitude and pain!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poem has promoted my one comment!.!.!.!.be at peace with yourself and the advancing years take you to carnivals, picnics, rollercoasters!.!.!.!.aging is not to be feared or regretted, but viewed as an adventure of the highest order!

That's what your poem did for me and to me!!! Not many poems do that!.!.!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I feel your pain, my comrade!. The dragon is not dead!. You must pick yourself up and do something entirely independent!. Wayward women will approach you: you are a "catch"!. Do not do anything you'll regret!. When you have displayed your independence, you will be desireable again!. Your wife will be there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very good!.
Get a little rooster like Elysbeth has and you'll be very creative and live a rich and full life!.
Peace!.!.Serenity!.!.Creativity!.!.!.
it's within us all!.!.!.
We are influenced by our environment!.

Coffee Time !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sorry
only WISDOM TOOTH DOES
SOME R BORN AS GENIUS URS TRULY THANKSWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's very good! I could really relate! Good job and keep writing! Don't let anyone stop you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have insight for only a few to appreciate!.
keep going!.Www@QuestionHome@Com