This is my first poem. Will you be gentle?

Question: This is my first poem!. Will you be gentle!?

A Love Yet To Be

Your voice warms me inside
Happyness filling me like the rising tide
Your beauty shines like a warming star
I wish you were nearer, not so far
Your smile is contagious and bright
Your beauty an amazing sight
I long to gaze upon your face
And how I long for your warm embrace
Your perfume so sweet yet I hardly remember
I'll find you again this November
I know in my heart you're the one for me
I just hope one day you'll seeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Aw that's adorable I love it!. Reminds me of one of Shakespeare's sonnets!.!.!. don't remember the number but it starts, "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day!?"

Just couple of quick pointers:
1) You mention beauty twice, once in line 3 and again in line 6!. It'd be better to avoid repetition!.
2) You misspelled happiness!. No big deal :D
3) You say long in two consecutive lines, once again it's better to avoid repetition!.

Otherwise, I really like it!. I didn't count the meter, but it flowed like you stayed consistent!. The rhymes, while simple, are nice and you don't have to work to make them rhyme!. It was a pleasant read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Feels warm and gushy like a Cinnabon!. Grin!. It's very Camelot-like!. Wonder what happens in November!? Intriguing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great! Awesome job!

Btw, on the second line, you spelled happiness wrong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com