Opinions on my dark poetic words?

Question: Opinions on my dark poetic words!?

i have fallen in love with my master of dark
because of his bites and that of his mark

they fall in love with me every night
they fall in love with my every bite

if they fall in love with my every bite
what is it they fear when they walk in the night!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow!.!.!.i really like that one babe!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's not the ever lasting life that's haunting!.!.!.

it's the fear of dying!.!.!. knowing!.!.!. that you haven't lived!.!.!.

Great sequence of couplets!!
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it
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It's not poetry!.

It makes no sense!.

How do you go from I, to his, to they!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!

ss???kiss Www@QuestionHome@Com