Your opinion of my very short poem?

Question: Your opinion of my very short poem!?

I
opened
my mouth
but didn't hear
a voice!.

She
sat there
looking
at me
in the dark!.

Then
walked away
hearing
a shattering
noise!.

I
won't
tell her
it was only
my heart!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its Very beautiful!.Short and sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi I like it i see something coming about, keep on reaching for the stars poetry is beautiful, keep on working on yr talen!.!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Were you drunk when you wrote this!? It seems like it!.

Surprisingly, drunken people are quite good a poetry!. So maybe you weren't drunk!. THIS POEM SUCKS!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I have read this before, worded a bit different!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like your style!. I enjoyed it!.

Gene Marie
Strong Truths

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Not too bad!. It's a work in progress and I see potential!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've seen this before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it :-) please read my poem "i that am"Www@QuestionHome@Com