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Question: Here's 2 fun poems i read' and wanted to share !.!. what do you think!?
There's no one to talk with -
I'll talk with my shoe!.
He does have a tongue
And an inner soul too!.
He's awfully well polished'
So straghtlaced and neat
[But he talks about nothing
But feet -feet -feet]!.!.!.

Big eating contest!.

The entrance fee cost me
five dollars ; and then
It cost me twenty more
For those burgers and fries!.
My hospital bill
Was a hundred and ten!.
But i won -
The five dollar prize!.!.

I thought these to be really cute ' so i posted them to give a smile!.
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Very, Very cute!. They made me giggle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the first one alot!.!.!. the second one!.!.!. meh!.!.!. what if you changed the ending of the first one though!? Something like this!.!.!.

There's no one to talk with -
So I'll talk with my shoe!.
He does have a tongue
And an inner soul too!.
He's awfully well polished
So straghtlaced and neat
But he always seems down
talking about defeat defeat defeat!.!.!.

Just a thought!.!.!. cute poem though
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These were really cute and i liked them a lot!.I bet your son loves them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com