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Question: Is it a little stormy where you're at tonight!?
HEAVEN'S SOLDIERS
The sky is laden with leaden somber
A sky obsessed with a pallor so grim
A volatile land of thwarted dawn
The stillborn air is charged with menace
The sky thrusts down it's fingers of damp
Egressing from heaven with unbridled force
The raindrops vow an oath bearing vengeance
Embalming the fixtures of land with their fury
A searing visage erupts from above
It's alien presence is not of this earth
It doles out it's fury with random precision
The lightning exacts a death for it's touch
The storm speaks out in voices urgent
A message subdued in a volley of rage
The cannons resound in arrogant triumph
The land enslaved with a kiss from a soldier!.
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I really did enjoy it!.!.!.its cute!.!.!.tonight in Greenville it is not stormy beautiful and a little windy but I love it!.!.!.
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Wow, that is beautiful! Another thanks for sharing! Best storm I've seen in a while!
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you sweet talker you!.!.!.I more than enjoyed it!!.!.!.xxx
It was stormy last night!.!.!.xxxWww@QuestionHome@Com
This poem has atmosphere!. I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com
thank you so much!.!.!.!.the storm is subsiding now!.!.!.!.lyWww@QuestionHome@Com