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Question: Opinions requested another dark poem!?
once left by my master lying dark and weak
'tis fresh blood and fresh flesh that i now seek
some will say its love at first bite
i agree as i fly searching through day and the nite
the more bites i give you
the more you will crave
its that love at first bite
that will make you my slaveWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ill be your slave!.!.!.!.bite me!
very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Somehow I seem to be thinking of dracula
I said this because of biting
and the blood
I will admit this is a great Halloween poem!.
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poop me a bird!.
then ill get back to you!.
Don't steal my work!.
I can see where you lurk!.
You selfish thing
Go away
GET away
Leave me in my peace!.
And I will hope you soul ceases
to exist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awesome!
i envy the way you write!. i'd love to write like this again, but alas, that part of me has died away and now i'm trying to revive it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful again! Is that why I crave being bitten!? Love at first bite!?

Bite me!

ss???kiss Www@QuestionHome@Com

incredible!
very good!
you have an extraordinary soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

are you a vampire!? lol
good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com