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Question: Your opinion on my dark poetry!?
are words most difficult for you to find
to become a rhythmic poet is all in your mind
with love at first bite is it blood that you seek
and angel of darkess or a master who's weak
the words off my lips might be tainted with lust
but biting you see, now that is a must!
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youre really good at this!Www@QuestionHome@Com
lol very good!. the words all rhyme together (gotta love rhyming) and it seems !.!.!.creepy yet interesting!. it sucks you in too!. as you read each line, you want to find out more!. great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Some might say kill this
Don't see the illness
The price we pay
For the dark of day
A welcome disease
Words come with ease
Never getting it right
Still shine on the night
Darkness is your friend
So bleed from your pen
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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing and keep em coming!
ss???kiss
bite me!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love your poems, very dark, but that's why I like them!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it,,,Www@QuestionHome@Com
Love it! Www@QuestionHome@Com
ooo well done!. I'm yearning more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
so so so good
one of the best that i have read in a while
KEEP 'EM COMING!Www@QuestionHome@Com
my familys pride is being related to edgar allen poe!.!.!.!.!.great great etc uncle lol so i gotta say its cool Www@QuestionHome@Com