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Question: I wrote a poem for my country!?

A Sad Song For My Mother
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I see you today in great demise
Hungry, and tired, and battered
I reach out, and cradled your hands in mine
And felt it quivering
These old hands had nurtured me
And made me what I am today
In your legacy, I acquired wisdom
In your history, I found pride
And I love you, with all my heart
!.!.!.and with all my soul

Now women are calling you a thief
And men regard you as a whore
I looked at your weary eyes
And spoke to them in silence
For I cannot do much
To free you from your misery
So after each selfishly spent day
I come home to you
And hold you in my arms
And sing you my love songs
In all tongues that I could muster
Longing for my brothers to hear the melody
And wake them up from deep slumber
!.!.!.in ignorance, in insolence, in apathy

In a faint, faint voice
I'll tirelessly ask for your forgiveness
For I am too weak to redeem you
!.!.and can do nothing,

But to share your pains
And mourn


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is a very sad song Anne, written with much feeling!.

In your legacy, I acquired wisdom
In your history, I found pride
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Good job, keep going,just work harder on the rhyme!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good job
Exellent
Keep going to be a writer!!
Have a nice day!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh! Now, I get it!. It was for our mother country, after all!.

Yes!. It is a very good poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com