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Position:Home>Poetry> I wrote a poem for my country?Question: I wrote a poem for my country!? A Sad Song For My Mother ----------- I see you today in great demise Hungry, and tired, and battered I reach out, and cradled your hands in mine And felt it quivering These old hands had nurtured me And made me what I am today In your legacy, I acquired wisdom In your history, I found pride And I love you, with all my heart !.!.!.and with all my soul Now women are calling you a thief And men regard you as a whore I looked at your weary eyes And spoke to them in silence For I cannot do much To free you from your misery So after each selfishly spent day I come home to you And hold you in my arms And sing you my love songs In all tongues that I could muster Longing for my brothers to hear the melody And wake them up from deep slumber !.!.!.in ignorance, in insolence, in apathy In a faint, faint voice I'll tirelessly ask for your forgiveness For I am too weak to redeem you !.!.and can do nothing, But to share your pains And mourn Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is a very sad song Anne, written with much feeling!. In your legacy, I acquired wisdom In your history, I found pride Www@QuestionHome@Com Good job, keep going,just work harder on the rhyme!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good job Exellent Keep going to be a writer!! Have a nice day!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh! Now, I get it!. It was for our mother country, after all!. Yes!. It is a very good poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |