Rest now, go to sleep
I am here beside you now
Relax now and dream
If you should waken
I will take your hand in mine
I‘ll watch over you
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I am here beside you now Relax now and dream If you should waken I will take your hand in mine I‘ll watch over you Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Absolutely lovely!. I would love to have had these words to recite to my kids when they were small!. LOVED it!Www@QuestionHome@Com It sounds like something a mother would say to her child and or a bible verse!. But to answer your question, no!. I don't now about you but if i were trying to go to sleep and there was someone i didn't know sitting beside me saying he/she will be there when i wake then i would be a little freaked!. It sounds a little stalker-ish too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That is a double Haiku poem that is beautiful!. Pretending that I know you I would trust and feel safe!. Very relaxing poem makes me wish that someone was there telling me to relax and would watch over me!. I like the Japanese poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com Maddz, that 'd be my pleasure!. BTW, I 'v heard that before!. Was it you !? Www@QuestionHome@Com I'd sleep like a babe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |