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Question: "Coffin of Love"!.!.!.!.What of a poem on flying!?

Coffin of Love

Smoked mirrors
Glazing eyes
Seeing inward

Crying in this nest
On wicked wings I soar
Albatross of love
Carries me down

Screamed out
Of my heart

Unraveling

Thinly roped
I hang on

I need to let go

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Hey give that man a cough drop,,,,Sorry ,,,Seems I'm unraveling,,I like this ,,,,,,Really like this one ,,,for the simple fact ,,1,,, it is good ,,,and 2,,, it has not been deleted ,,,,,,


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The baby bird needs to trust his wings and let go to fly!. The parents often have to push the little birds out so that they will fly on their own, learn their own power!.

With a coffin, however, this takes me to vampirism!. The wicked wings of a bat, traveling to the one you love; wanting to bring that person with you into your underworld life!.

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Every once in awhile
if you look up,
there may be someone
Shimmying down!.
If the rope holds,
they will get to you!.
Holding on together,
different reasons aside
side by side,
1!.!.!.2!.!.!.!.3!.!.!.!.!.GO
Together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tie that rope around that Albatross's neck and throw it overboard!.
Love is a constant!. So is Despair!.

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My Coffin is Open, I will catch you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com