Comments on my poem, What does it mean?

Question: Comments on my poem, What does it mean!?

A baby without a face
A dream i forever Chase
a love i cant complete
a race i cant competeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

you have an identy
its ok to chase dreams, even if its forever
true love will complete its self
love is not a race, nor is life, taking your time, take in the sights

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good job, good luck
hang in theirWww@QuestionHome@Com

Perhaps you know someone who had an abortion and understand that now that baby will never have the chance to love, to find out who and what s/he is!.

Unless there is a specific reason you do not capitalize "i" and use apostrophes in can't, then use proper grammar!. If there is a reason, which I think there is for the "i" as being singularly unimportant, again use proper grammar not texting words!.

A feeling of being invisible in the world in which you live!. Chase is significant -- but you need to show me, your reader, why!. Remember, show don't tell!.

A baby without a face <-- the unborn, perhaps dreams and career
A dream i forever Chase <- why is chase capitalized!? "i" or I
a love i cant complete <- can't
a race i cant compete <- very much alone

Ignore the one who wrote you have no career as a poet -- you do! Write every day for at least 10 minutes; don't take the pen from the paper to gaze around you -- write whatever; eventually you will write who you are, and you will have learned a great deal about writing!. When you look back in a few weeks, you'll be amazed -- and you will find prose and poetry!.
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

looks like you don't have a career in poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com