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Question: What of a poem about tears!?

Nothing Left Behind

You touched her
Tortured her
Turned her in two
Then she grew up
And threw up
Her hands with no hope
In sight
To darkness
So dark light locked out
All who cared
She shared nothing
But the shame
Blame in herself
Less the child should grow
To never know
To ever know
Love as it should be

It's not what you took
But what you left behind

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Black cows on a field of white snow!.!.!.!.do NOT bring these horrors into a warm, life-preserving barn of memories!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Then she felt the sun,
Saw the Light,once again
Her Life renewed!.
Short Lived!.
The Curtain Closed!.
Darkness,remains!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have had enough tears for a few days
lets move onto laughter,, shall we!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

moving

It's not what you took
But what you left behind

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This is painful and can easily describe 2 stages of my life!.
Thank GOD it's over!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, Hydro - this is moving!. The last lines are some of the best ever written!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great two last lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com