Suspended Sentence..............?

Question: Suspended Sentence!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?

a
drunk survives
a
Mother dies
the drunk
lies
a father
cries
neighbor pies
don't dry
eyes
a family
cries
a
Judge sighs
his
shy, wise
eyes
Mystify
All Rise the
verdict
buys
a sentence flys
The Drunk's
high
a family
cries
their father dies!.

Time Flys:

The drunk's since been arrested 4 times for DUI's!. Uninsured!. No license!. Welfare!. Divorced!. Never spent a day in jail!.

My brother-in-law never fully recovered!.

Justice Lies!.

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Great use of line-breaking to make the rhyme more powerful!.

This poem speaks loudly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dude seriously this poem is awesome!
it moves at such a fast pace and has a heart beating tempo that pulsates from each line!. The rhymes incorporated just give it that extra "something" that takes it from just plain good to amazing!.
i also admire the fact that within the poem you could add a message of such profound meaning! WICKED!!
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Beautiful!.

My grandmother was killed in a car crash when my mom was 9!. The drunk driver got only 6 months!. It's such a shame that a life was lost, an entire family was destroyed, yet he got that light sentence!.

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My nieces were killed in an auto collision--hit head-on by a drunk driver who crossed the median!. He also died!. My brother-in-law suffered a heart attack from which he never recovered and died shortly thereafter!.

Where is justice!?
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It's sad isn't it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that someone with an obvious drinking problem can go on and on to do the same thing over and over again!. Makes you wonder what it will take to get that guy off the road!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is well said, my compliments!. Tough subject, I had a high school classmate die at the hands of a perpetual drunk with no license!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

very sad,and its still also very true as it still happens daily!.
a very deep+honest feling poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful poem!.

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I hardly ever do this but you brought tears to my eyes!. The system doesn't work and the people who suffer for it are seldom heard!. Thank You!Www@QuestionHome@Com

So sorry!. Love the poem!. Really makes you mad what they get away with!. What happened to the mandatory sentence for this!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautiful!.!.wowWww@QuestionHome@Com

*sad* The travesty of it allWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love the poem and am sorry for the pain!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Justice is indeed blindWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sad and beautifully written! Sorry for your loss!

ss???kiss Www@QuestionHome@Com

How sad!.!.!.!.!.!.They should jail them, as they are murderers!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMG *crying*

I went to my fathers funeral today, and this poem really touches me!.

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What Justice I ask, no justice for some, maybe a slow burn on a skewer in hell is what will await!.

very moving !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its a Mad Mad!.!. bad Natural world out there !.!. and we Are very prone to hazzards!!Www@QuestionHome@Com