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Question: Thoughts on this poem people!? (I know everyone asks you to read their poems, but it's fairly short!) :)!?
If it's crap say what should be better, if it's good say why!! :)



Hindsight

I will never make that mistake!.
I am above it,
Better than it,
Beyond it!.
I am the clear mind and rational thinker!.

I am the one who made that mistake!.
I had ignored it,
Avoided it,
Mocked it!.
I let it flatter and fool me, before inviting it in!.

I sat alone and regretted that mistake!.
I made excuses,
Allowances,
Exceptions!.
I deconstructed and despaired!.

Never again will I make that mistake!.
You seized it,
Made it reality,
And took it with you!.
You stole the sanctity of it, and left me
With the wounded masses!.

That mistake was mine to look down on,
To fear,
To shun,
To advise against!.

So you have claim to it and it is yours!.
Now all I can do,
Is hope to repeat that mistake!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow!.
i love it!.
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