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Question: Please read and critique this poem ;)!?
Life

Growth is to humans as
Maturation is to trees
We were once lost and without reason
Eventually our path was found and now everlasting
But what goes up must come down,
And life is like a golden eagle bird
Ever striking twice
And because that’s the way things are
I love you so, I love you so, I love you so



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow! You're 12!? Keep writing!.
It doesn't matter what you are writing about and I don't care!.
This piece of work has so much in it,it took my breath away,and I'm not easily impressed with people's poems,especially on this site!

You're great!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know!.!. At first I hated it!.!. But if you are talking about a relationship that may have almost ended and came back together I could like it!.!. That's the only sense I made of it!.!.!.
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