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Rocking Chair Morning
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Grace is sleeping at my feet
While George dreams on my lap
The porch is dark and cool and quiet!.
Except for little tree frogs
Tuning their voices
To harmonize with
The breeze…
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oh and they do tune their voices!!
put this in Emmys box too!.
this will be good for her to know how to find home
if she ever feels lost!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed this -- have to tell you a little story!. When I lived in Florida, my brother came to visit!. On his bed was a frog decorated blanket!. In the morning, he actually thought I had an alarm clock to go with the frog motif on the blanket!. The sound of tree frogs came through the open window!. Of course when he couldn't find the clock to turn it off, and figured out what was happening!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds familiar - - - three weeks ago!. I liked that version when Grace and George were, metaphorically simply, "cats!."

question then:
Do you have time to sit a while!?

Before Dawn
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Back out on the porch
rocking in my chair,
cats sleeping at my feet
day’s promises are fair!.

Sun has yet to rise
sit and let the dark
breezes sneak through screens
softly find their mark!.

Permeate my space
silent sounds so strong
as peace enters in
know that I belong!.


- yes, the above poem was a marvel full of wonder!. no so much this version!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like perfect bliss - when you publish it with your other poems, you will have to change Grace and George's names!.!.!.!.to something more feline!.!.!.!.so folk won't think they are little kids!.!.!.mind you, it works even if that is the case!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a beautiful porch,,,,And a glorious pre-dawn morning!.!.!.You with your two cats ,,Me with my Gizmo fully stretched out in front of the monitor ,,,,,

I had felt like I had been there,,,On your porch ,,,,,,,,
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I love these snippets with the "kids"!.!.!.!.!.


My mittens couldn't swim fast enough :-((( In memory of Sparky Boy, Sparky Girl, Puud and Mama NuWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like this poem
its about having
peace and quiet
The frogs are harmonizing
with their croaking!.
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You need to turn the TV on! lol Listening to tree frogs, I rank that right up there to listening to crickets! lol Nice poem though!.
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A musical morning!. May the rest of your day sing as you go about your healing duties!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Picture the scene calm and tranquil paradise!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am so jealous, all I hear is a few cars and the sound of the neighbour's radio across the way, I swear he's deaf! This is at 6 a!.m!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very calm and soothing!.!.!.unlike Felix and Leon!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

PLEASE! Can I come sit with you for just ten minutes!? They're re-paving our street and it's nothing but noise from 7am on!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, a peaceful morning is a good thing!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice !!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A great peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

NiceWww@QuestionHome@Com

twice as good with no houseguests, eh!?Www@QuestionHome@Com