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what does this poem make you think of!?





in a moment of breath away

when i have to face my living day

embraced in my alive forlorn corpse

weak between ourselves me and i

i mean nothing to live without

living in my skeleton of hollow pride

drafted from a remote coast somewhere under the waves

an unspoken melancholy holding my hands gently intertwined through my soul

the wind passing a gaze of understood silence and retreats

fading behind the cloudless sky

where earth meets the galaxies eye

a colorblind blue endures in its racist

making my life there seem swallowed, so fragilely stolen

leaving gone my presence in past

nothing i knew ever last

tossed in faith to an ocean unsettling

the current shoves against itself

cold breaking water of unfeeling love

we are cast into the debt of fear

if i only knew what a smile could do

but all i see is the oblivious blue

forget my name

or who you are to me

my feet are walking on unbalanced creed

when i fall, don't miss me, i won't hold on for you

i miss being a life i once used to do

but those thoughts are in vain and only shadows i can't touch

leaves a bittersweet taste i must forget, i must

let me be lost and unaware of you

because Lord, I have not one thing worth rescue

i'll blow away like salt in the air and dissolve in the ocean I came into

i'll burn in your eyes and suck the water out of you

i'll feed off my lies my only hope that looks through

because Lord, i have not one thing i hold that's true

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is beautiful!. It reminds me of the times when I'm sitting somewhere staring off in the distance just pondering my life and the blessings and hurts I have experienced!. I often have complex feelings like those which are portrayed in your lovely poem!. Thank you for starting my day off in blessed assurance that I am important to someone!. :) <3

Please continue writing!. :) Www@QuestionHome@Com