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dusk-soaked flat lands the mouse shivers and scratches at your eyes gently whiskers chalky fear weeping wondering why men make horrors while the skin and bones children become the thin skinned mouse with bloody tooth and scattered splintered cracks on crushed head!. Skull art, if you're sick metaphor if you're sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Why is it that the more morose you become, the more I can relate to your words!?!.!.!.perhaps another time!. For now, let me say that this is almost too powerful, it hurts my soul!. You have an art, a gift, of making the simplest of words evoke the deepest of passions and meanings!. This is no exception!. Thank you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Maybe this is of comfort to someone!. You never know!. Just because it is not for me does not mean it might not make someone else feel good!. I always thought that dpm sounds like dump but I wonder what it means!. I myself am not a person who enjoys most any dramatic shows or anything bad that happens mostly!. I did like the tangerine poem very much and even felt that it helped me to understand myself more!. If it is about something sad or bad it is not usually my thing!. I know people who thrive on it and that is them so to each their own!. There are children in the world who starve to death and children are the most innocent and close to heaven in the world!. I don't really understand this poem though unless it is about war or drugs!. I have seen young people who died of heroine addiction and it is very sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com mmmh, wow i'm inspired!. it defiantly sets a mood for me and lets me think about it but i don't think any emotion or mood is necessarily bad or bad for you!. it is just something we all experience and i like to dwell upon things that can open doors into my emotions!. it's fun playing with all disgusting words together and creating a new branch of off thoughts from the very core of our being!. ok, that sounded weird but i also like to "play" with other emotions like the bliss of being a child!. but this poem that you wrote is like a work of art for a very hungry picture!. it's short, but you immediately fall into what your saying!. i think it's beautiful, bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com Bank accounts gettin low Jobs are far in between Hunger is felt in the belly!. Economy is a low down as well The government is scratching us in the eye as well as that mouse!. Living from pay check to paycheck We all try to pay our bills!. Sadly we trudge on contemplating where the next move is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com What does DPM mean!? Sorry, if it is staring me in the face!. Hi, Buk (not chatting, honest) Are you having a bad day!? We're supposed to be trying to write humorous stuff!.!.!.!.this brings me images of the trenches in the WWI, except you have mice where they had rats gnawing at corpses!.!.!.apparently according to something I recently read - the rats would eat the little place just below the nose first and take out eye-balls in their tiny hands to savour like grapes!.!.!.!.horrible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Maybe it's just me man, but that sounds sick and depressing!. There is already so much sick and depressing things happening in the world without reading MORE sick and depressing stuff!. I know, I know, I didn't have to read it, but I'm just giving my thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I believe this may be a question to ask the children of nurture!. It sounds like a drug muddled life and child!. Nurture it is, sad more than I care to realize?Www@QuestionHome@Com I vote for sad and metaphor!. Beautiful use of words to depict horrors!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I only have one comment!. It's Monday!. sigh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This didn't depress me and I'm hardly artistic, but since I was sad earlier I'll stay that way - - - for the time being!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Poor little children is all I can say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is so sad sounding!. Like I was earlier!. I'm all better now though!. I'm on here and with my friends!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Indeed,to the horrors of mankind,I say nay,and f*** it all!Www@QuestionHome@Com I am with Hippie Chick!. I feel all depressed now!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I find this poem uplifting in a whimsical way :)xWww@QuestionHome@Com I like it! Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com Maybe it's just her, or me!.!.!.I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |