Floating to the ground
Soft white fluff, it makes no sound
Snow is all around
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Soft white fluff, it makes no sound Snow is all around Thanks xxxWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Strictly speaking, Haiku is not supposed to rhyme, so if it's for an assignment, that might be a problem!. On the other hand, I don't like Haiku, and I love your poem!. It paints a picture, it sounds good, and it makes me happy!. Thanks!. Www@QuestionHome@Com lunabean, that is not a haiku!. @asker, I think it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com hmmm very good floating to the hard ground soft white fluff it makes not a sound snow is all aroundWww@QuestionHome@Com |