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Question: Do you like my haiku, how can i improve it!?
Floating to the ground
Soft white fluff, it makes no sound
Snow is all around

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Strictly speaking, Haiku is not supposed to rhyme, so if it's for an assignment, that might be a problem!.
On the other hand, I don't like Haiku, and I love your poem!. It paints a picture, it sounds good, and it makes me happy!. Thanks!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

lunabean, that is not a haiku!.

@asker, I think it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmmm very good

floating to the hard ground
soft white fluff it makes not a sound
snow is all aroundWww@QuestionHome@Com