there was a tree
it was green
it was brown
it reminded me off doodoo
a spider was on it
i hate treessWww@QuestionHome@Com
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it was green it was brown it reminded me off doodoo a spider was on it i hate treessWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yes, i like your poem!. Most people make poems that try to make them sound intelligent, by putting "big words" and sentances together that are impossible to understand!. They're trying to make the illusion they know what they're saying, when really it's scrambling words together that have nothing to do with eachother!. And then making up some big heartfelt meaning, or it's just EMO and depressing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com if you had put a little more thought into it, you could have made it much better!. your fourth line could have been selected with much more thought!.!.!. it actually ruined what I thought started off as a good poem!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com shutup&getalife kthnzbyeWww@QuestionHome@Com lol yea its awesome!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com oh bravo good rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com no, i do notWww@QuestionHome@Com |