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Question: Today, I choose to reflect on what I have missed by repeating myself and conjuring input from!.!.!.!.!?
a new batch of friends, poets, and seekers!.
How about you, on a Sunday morning!?!?


Living As The Clock Ticks

You missed
it!.
While the sky busted up the clouds
you sat waiting, poised!.
While the sea sank its borders
you played scrabble in a smoky room!.
While the forest begged for air
you blamed the
chalk-faced preacher
and his wooden words!.
While
the bear lay fat and quiet
you piled tinder
on the constant rail!.
While the wind farmed dust in the streets
of anywhere
you sang the old gospels
one by one
on a farm with
too green corn
and all the while, the meter maid
was counting minutes and the
bear became
fat and grew dreams
in a dirt bunker and all
the while
as you waited dreamless
in your backyard clothes
broad cloth clinging to your old man bones
the thundering
tick
tock
swept clean the old days
and the whistle blew
your train
straight on through
the station!.

~~~~DPM~~~~
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A very eloquent and evocative poem!. There is a deceptive simplicity in your words, which create such complex and intense images!. This reminds me of my grandfather, and his poised, dreamless waiting!. I have read this poem several times, and appreciate it more each time!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep,I do some of that all right,then I chase the train and trip on the tracks,!.!.such is life!.Maybe I'll be so brave as to put one on,meanwhile,I just love yours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The train has come and gone, but still I sit and wait!.
Tick tock, tick tock, as the time goes by!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just loved this one dear boy!. Thought provoking and deep!. Makes me use some brain cells that would go unused but for yours and a few others words of wisdom!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just spent the past 4 hours playing bridge with Mrs!. P and two of her 70+ friends!. Church bells are forever ringing here!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm loving this side of you!. Your poems are extremely thought provoking and vivid!.

*Glad to be part of the new batch of friends!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm writing again so nothin' else matters!.!.!. sometimes I wish that wasn't true,but it is and i'm just a selfish shyt sometimes!.!.!.alottaofthe!.!.!.x0Www@QuestionHome@Com

you can't get rid of your old friends that easily ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com

All your poems are great!. Love reading them, and they give me food for thought!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice relaxing poem just what i need that ails me!. Think i'll lie down a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hope Sunday afternoon works!. the clock ticks but I'm going to be busy till the last call!. Carpe Diem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Makes me ponder of all my missed opportunities!. I enjoyed the provocation!. Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice! I think I'll take the day off today and just relax!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And the poets
Wrote
And I missed it
Once moreWww@QuestionHome@Com

The train doesn't stop at the Sanitarium, does it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sometimes we get hurt most by the people who love us yet we don't let go easily!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Worthy of a Master!. I always knew it was there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A good read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

On this day of falling, you bring hope!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You remind me of an angry and vibrant Rod McKuen!.!.!.!.!.when can I buy the book !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dang Buk !.!.!. This is a great you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Much obliged, Sir!.
and the clock ticks on!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poems blow me away!. you are very gifted :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i never wore!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.sunday dress!.!.!.

coz the man in the robe!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.has the devil on he's side!.!.!.

smoking my cigar!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com