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Question: READ this FreKING poem!!?
Thank you!.!.!.

I am not me, so who am I, tell me how and tell me why, the world that lay before myself I do not know yet I despise

"You can't remember can’t recall!? A life forgotten is not at all!." The love I've given and I've received form vacant heart I have deceived; I lie to you, but first to me!.

Eyes so blind, heart so numb, what is this world that I've become!? What I can't beget, or better yet to overcome is my regret!. Best described before my eyes a blinding light through crimson skies, the Earth she wilts and flesh does hurt, and all who stay do besit this Earth!.

I am me and I'm not you, I have the strength, I'll see it through!. met we have, I won’t forget, although I'd like I would regret!. Through the deceit, my heart beats, I do breath, and I do eat, I'm sure I'll live and granted I do; I wish to meet another you!.

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Well I love the way your worded the initial question!.

I think its good ;) keep it up dude!!! You have some great descriptions in there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is so touching!. not to be mushy or anything but it freaking sweet!. wow i wish i could write poems like that
heres one of mine
each mourning you wonder about your day,
wondering on what will you do, and what will you say!.
you wonder who will talk, and who will be silent,
you wonder who's going to be polite, who's going to be violent!.

and further on in life comes the relationships
people will change and so will your friendships
how the good times you had with that person never last
you often wonder if you will forget the past

still wondering on what life is about
you just feel like just giving out a shout
and when the losses come on by
you often feel like you should die

the emotions, the dreams, its all part of life
still painful thoughts , painful like a knife
you wonder if life is all about pain
sitting and crying in the rain

although there are many times of happiness
there is always times of sadness
love and hate always passing by
you often always wonder why

life should be enjoyed when you are here
because at times, death can be near
so live your life without any regrets
because you'll be someone that no one forgets

when dawn turns to dusk and dusk turns to dawn
each day you learn to move on
so keep your chin up and keep your hopes op high
so when the time comes youll be ready to say goodbyWww@QuestionHome@Com