Critique My New Poem: Is There Somebody There in Universe?

Question: Critique My New Poem: Is There Somebody There in Universe!?

Is there somebody there in universe!?
Knock, knock, knock
we need to know the answer
We are ready to greet you
if we get your electronic signal
Shoot your beams
Direct it to planet earth
your universe partners
We are anxious
to hear from you

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It's a poem of curiosity, hope and optimism!. I also like the way the lines shorten as the poem goes down!. It gives a peaceful feeling!. Keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I always wonder the same thing!. Is there someone out there!? Let's just hope they are friendly!!

This poem is ok, not very deep, but makes you think about the question: "What WOULD we do if someone from "out there" really DID contact us!?"

I hope you don't mind my suggestions, but how about starting each line with a capital letter!?

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Ok !. not my style !. But good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com