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Question: Is my poem any good what do you think!?
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Like Autumn leaves flee,
her tear drops flutter,
only now a bare!.!.!.bald tree,
the eyes dry she utter!.
Leaves once green now lye,
by salty tears and rain,
that fell till Autunm die,
but braches her tree retain!.

The idea i was trying to get across, was comparing the leaves falling from a tree to those of a women crying, as if the tears falling like leaves!. also comparing her to the leaves the tree lost, because the branches will soon be covered again!. Hope you got that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it was a really good poem and I liked the way you used the alternate line rhyming approach!.

keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com

"Braches" is not a word, and as for the rhyming, it was muddled and boring!.

The content was very clear and predictable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank God for the explanation in the added details section!.

Your seasonal prose compells* me to eat mulch!. Yum!. Yum!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I got your meaning ! Very moving !. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dude thats amazing i write poems all the timeWww@QuestionHome@Com

That was amazing! Carry on with the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

v!.good!Www@QuestionHome@Com