Poem my Darkest Days do you like it.?

Question: Poem my Darkest Days do you like it!.!?

Why is life so hard' never is it easy
Just more heartaches and despair
as my heart is so heavy' feels like i cannot carry it much longer!.
Sorry i failed your sweet summers ways and the coldest winter days!.
Now as i fade death and his reaper
will be coming real soon'as i watch for my'long awaited doom!.
Just another daughter' just another rotter!.
When the sun shines down on me' it feels so dark and so cold!.
May all your dreams come true'
as this is my last day !.
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Yeah!.!.!.what peachie said! But Cami, I just lost a couple of friends for real, and one to suicide!.!.!.so!.!.mind what you're saying, and how people are going to take it!.!.oh, and!.!.!.LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL!!>>!.!.yes 'spellcheckah',
I AM shouting!.!.!.you can't love the pleasure unless you've known the pain!.!.own both! Attitude of gratitude will fix you up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked this poem much and i think it's good and i have seen you do happier ones also!.I am sad that people like that girl are so nasty when answering our questions' as there is no need for it really!.I know this is a poem and nothing else' as that what poets do' famous ones and not famous like you and i lol Cya Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh!.!.!.i loved that! some of the rhyming was kinda corny, though!.!.hehe sorry!. like the soon and doom!.!.!.that line didnt sound right to me!.!.but other than that it was really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a snotty child making statements to piss off his parents!. Didn't find it interesting!. Too many commonly used terms!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know!. You do have good emotions though!. Try to get deeper!. And just write it out it doesn't have to rhyme!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi Cami, I really hope this is fiction!. Because I just met you and I wouldn`t want too see anything happen to you!. Things will get better!.
I hope your Son is doing well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it lots as your emotions were not sugar coated and raw to the bone as they can be!.I think it's well written Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes i do like it
good job
keep it up Www@QuestionHome@Com