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Question: Hey what do you think of my poem!?
rookie poem!. my 1st one!. edit it && tell me what you think!? thanx

Wasting Time


They say time
is wasted on the young
Just running and moping
and grumbling along
maybe it's true,
cause maybe we do!.
Spend time dreaming things
that will never be
fantasizing about celebrities
that we'll never see
walking around,
like chickens without heads,
laughing like idiots,
then find ourselves hangin'
by a thread
some are bratty,
some are shy,
some are killers,
some always cry!.
we make a mess
we break glass
adults will never understand us
they'll scream at us
and always make a fuss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is so true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

? write poems too and i want to publish them when i grow up so if i lie and say that you are a bad poet would it do me good in future because i would lose one competitor!? :P (It is actually nice) Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its very tear jerking, I loved itWww@QuestionHome@Com