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Question: What of a poem that doesn't say enough!?
From Me To Who

I write these words
To ease my soul
Never knowing who will see

Parts of my life, I expose
To set this broken heart free


They speak of dreams
Scream for hope
Things I know with doubt

Just words, spinning round
Dieing to find a way out


Landing in places
On smiling faces
In hearts as sad as mine

I write these words
To open hearts
I hope to one day find


So if you read
And can see
Something that rings true

Hold it close
And know for me
I wrote them just for you

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Loved it, my friend, and here's why,
cause what you said is EXACTLY why i post!.!.!.!.
I so identified with it, thought you had crept in my mind
and found the words to help me express it!.
I love it when a poet can do that, and do it so well!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

Words are but words, a cord struck
Dumb, and harsh, a vial of poison
Or elixir poured from a raging tomb
Aflame and burning with toxic fumes

Listen, listen well but do not hear
The words Listen it trickles and pours
With bleeding wrath and woe and woe
It bleeds yet none could heed!.!.!.

It is the voice of a supernal soul
Embroiled amidst a hellish night
A fight, a war a battle won, just began
And done towards a journeys end!.

Another day, another life and year
And bear to hear what lies inside
Shun oneself and listen not
For it is lost, in pits of world despair!.

It yields nor bows and bent remaining
Yearning for something remiss
A bliss, a hold on another world
Apart adrift and within us all!.

Amidst this hub of kindred souls
In pain, and love and knowing smiles
Listen, but do not hear for words
Are spoken without thought of another’s heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From Me to You

I listen to words
to ease my soul
Always knowing who I'll see

fragments of life, all exposed,
straining to set themselves free!.

I speak of dreams,
scream for life,
faith is created through doubt!.

These words, salvation of my heart,
flying to find it's way out!.

So I will read
and I can see
many things ringing true!.

I hold it close
and know within me
I'll write words back to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem
says much,
and asks to
share each
others hearts
with a healing
touch,
I share
your care
and you
have captured
part of my heart
many, many
poems you penned,
weeks and weeks
ago!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Owwwwwwwww ! OH ! It is so nice shucks , love it!.

I will hold it close , because the words you say
ring true!.
Here's a special thank you , from me , to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This says more than enough, my friend, MORE than enough!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks HP
how bout a hug !?!? (( HP))

bye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com