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Dance Me To The End Of Love

Dance with me in love
Dance with me in life
When did enduring love begin!?
The day we became man and wife

There is patience and understanding
We try to be unselfish and kind
Though not a fairy-tale romance
No greater love will we find

Sharing dreams, passions, and desires
Building each other up when we fall
We've learned to say I'm sorry
And I love you through it all

Our two hearts beat as one
Cherishing what we have from above
Dance with me forever
Dance me to the end of love
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if it is sentimental to you and means something to you, dont worry about what others think!. poetry is all about the author and the connection with the readerWww@QuestionHome@Com

hrm, good job "borrowing" the title from Leonard Cohen's song "dance me to the end of love!."!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sure its cheesy, but its cute and sweet and lovely!.
Its cheesy but its beautiful!. If you know what I mean!.
Its lovely!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

every girl like some cheese every once in a while!.
your so romaaanntic and your name is pretty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lovely poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its koo!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awwww! that is so sweet!
you are a great poet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

extremely
whoever you're writing it for will love you thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is high-quality cheese!.

Be proud, it's excellent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com