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Question: Gimmics are real ( i got so bored i wrote something stupid!. poetry)!?
totally spaced, they changed it's place!. what the hell could you do!? with all these fools!. all pretending!. they were never there!. until it hit so just be scared!. i will bury you!. eat you up!. this is over!. i give up!. helping you!. to have a clue!. lets let the heavens judge!. judgment day and you will pay!. i need help sometimes and this is my way!. to get out!. to escape!. back to the back row!. no debate!. just me sitting and setting it straight!. holding on!. i have no boss!. just a line!. just the cost!. all this is my bossWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's really COOL! I love it, except the last sentence sounds a little repetitive,I would cut it out, or maybe the earlier reference to boss!. Honestly, I see a lot of poetry I don't like at all on yahoo answers, but this poem is unique and interesting!. I wish I could be that productive when I get bored!Www@QuestionHome@Com