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Question: Will you please tell me your opinions on this poem I wrote!?
“Just give me a kiss!.
Don’t give me no lip!.
I’m all out of lies for the night!.
But if you insist!.
Then we’ll reminisce!.
On the words that we said!.
On our engagement’s deathbed!.
Where it clearly affirms that!.
There’s nothing wrong with female comradely!.
Anti-monogamy!.
For the females they follow me home!.
Cause the vows only say love and devote!.
And what better way to devote myself to you than to satisfy my needs with other women!.”Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
sound like you were out without being a real man!. this kind of poem get men in real trouble as far being in a committed relationship!. however, the poem is pretty deep!. i enjoy this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds more like lyrics for a hip hop/rap piece than a written poem!.

Pathetic, egocentric message - but really not bad for it's form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! HA! HA! HA! HA! Www@QuestionHome@Com

really nice! :] great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com