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Question: Do you like the poem i wrote!? (honest opinions)!?
its for my boyfriend!.!.!.

you make me laugh, you make me smile
it makes me want to stay a while
the things you do, the things you say
help me make it through the day
my life without you would be nothing,
at this point you've become my air
something i could not live without
youre amazing, i have no doubt
more than anyone youre on my mind
i think about you all the time
if only you could see
exactly what you mean to me
you'd never have your doubts for
you'd know im forever yours
no guys will ever compare to you
because you're my dream come true
with everything you make me feel
i know for a fact that this is real
i want you more than anyone
if i were a plant then you'd be the sun
i know that love is just a word and we are young
but this dream we share has just begun
i love you, always and forever
nor will i stop not now, not ever!.

too cheesy!? too lame!? too horribly written!?
opinions!? aha im nervous obviously :P
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that is really cute!.!. you should think about making it into a song!. grab a guitar and put it together with some chords!. it would be a big hit!. i love it!!!! it makes me want to love somebody!.

keep writing

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There is no need to be nervous
Your poem is clearly about
the times you and your friend
spends together!.
It talks about how much you love him
The good times the both of you have!.
also the different ways you would spend together
but your love for each other will never die ever
I have a suggestion you two get together
read this to him
mail it out to him
let him know how you feel

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It's OK!. It's a bit cliché, there's nothing in it that I haven't heard before, but it's not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

really sweet!.!.i think you did greatWww@QuestionHome@Com