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Question: I wrote another peom!.!.what do u think!?
Tears Like Rain

Love always hurts and causes pain
It’s followed with tears that come down like rain!.
Sometimes many words are regrettably said
And others stay in the secrecy of our own head!.

But there are those fleeting moments every once in a while
That makes love seem just not quite so vile!.
The time you kissed me without any intent of stopping
I remember my heart wouldn’t quit flopping!.

I was actually happy for once in my life
But the joy was taken away, replaced with a knife!.
The music and laughter has all turned to dust
We’ve lost that feeling of excitement and lust!.

Somewhere along the way our love ended
And I don’t know if my heart will ever be mended!.
You really hurt me, that is for sure
And when it comes to heartbreak, there is no cure!.

What’s the point of love if it always ends like this!?
It’s all sacrificed just for those few moments of bliss!.
The smile and laughter, are they really worth it!?
Because once it’s over, none of it means ****!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a beautiful poem
that first paragraph certainly said it
The emotions in here are intense
Even the title of the poem
makes sense
because a person's tears are
like rain
You were happy with a kiss
the feeling of love can be happy
Dancing with the music
along with the joy this is what make
it fun!.
Then suddenly something changed
the feelings of sadness came
besides the pain there was heartache
something that can't be cured
or mended!.

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You are worth more than heartache! Believe in yourself! You are beautiful and the sunshine will be with you again! I am a mom and I feel for you! That day will happen when the heartache will end! You have love from many miles of many smiles! Please believe in YOUWww@QuestionHome@Com

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