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Question: What of a poem about dancing!?
Moving
Graceful she moves
Child like face
Smiling
Do you want to dance!?
Ghost ropes tie me
Lead booted lover
Lifting
Weighing
If only to move again
Effortless she sings
Angels breath
Whispering
Do you want to dance!?
Two left feet lock me
Tapped out giver
Tripping
Prodding
If only to move again
Quietly she comes
Gentle touch
Offering
Do you want to dance!?
Eyes awash drown me
Sunken sweet savior
Pleading
Wanting
If only to move again
Patiently she waits
Magical kiss
Inviting
Do you want to dance!?
Heart open to me
Valiant blue dancer
Reaching
Releasing
Trying to move again
Please may I have this dance!?
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This beautiful poem engaged the inner being in me that would love to dance!. On every level, it is provocative and moving!. I love it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It reminded me of the first social dance - where boys and girls tended to stand - on the opposite sides of the dance floor!. This image - seems to say - that the girl is doing the asking!. She asked four times for a dance - and finally - had to say "please"!. So - get on with it boy - dance with her!. However, if the boy is on the asking end - the hesitation can show much in self confidence - truly a different story and viewpoint!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I look at dance like an art that only individual people can paint!. It is innocent, sweet, romantic, calm, and it expressed and defines the beauty and infinities of life!.
This poem is well posed and I love it!. I like the style of it!. You did a great job and are a phenomenal writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh wow, dance is one of my favorite subjects in poetry, perhaps because I never personally have been able to dance!. Alas!.!.!.all good things come in time!. Thank you, hydropro, and yes, you may have this dance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A vertical expression of a horizontal desire - once it's explained everything seems easier!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
At the end of the night ever so slowly like a garden snail
Oh darling, save the last dance for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I cannot dance,
I have no rhythm
In dancing sir!.!.!.
Two left feet
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