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Question: What do you think of my poem!? 10 points for the best answer ever!!!!!?
A Dream of Mine

A dream that I wish to have
No one really understands How I feel to be different
In a way I want to them understand
I dream I have is untannible
To achieve in something is to earn a way
I have my heart set on that dream
No matter what I do to get it
Nothing happens and it didn’t come
I try to pretend like I already have it
A dream of mine is hard to believe

Sometimes, I wish to hear like you
Sometimes, I don’t want to hear at all
In my world, I feel alone
I get very frustrated like a bee
Frustration doesn’t always help
I just want to break something
I want to release my feelings
My dream seems to be impossible
A dream is a way to an end
I wish there’s a cure but there isn’t any
I just want to scream so loud
I feel like there’s no chance for me

I want to hear like everyone can
How is it possible to find hope!?
I cannot remember how to hear
I was a baby when the sound was gone
Sometimes, I ask if I get the chance
I’d do anything to trade my hearing
If there’s a cure, I’d be the first person to hear
No matter what I do, I just dream on
In my heart, I am happy for who I am
No one could change me
In my ears, it’s like a tunnel but no sound

With sound, there’s light
There are good reasons to not be able to hear
My friends are there for me no matter what
I can read lips without using my ears
I meet lots of people who can’t hear
I am glad that I’m not alone that’s there’s somebody else
My grandma understands me
I showed everyone I can do anything
Once my mind is set, I believe in myself
If I could hear, I would not be here
This is a dream of mine


What do you think of my poem!? Does it express enough!? Yeah, I do have hearing loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow i kinda figured you were deaf just by reading but at the end even if you would of not put that you were i still would of known because that poem is amazing i understood how u felt just by reading it Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its pretty amazing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think they SUCK!.

Now, about those 10 points!. Gimme!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent poem I love it I wish i could write like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"i want to them understand" does not make sense Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really really like it!.

you did a great job ;DWww@QuestionHome@Com