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Question: How do you like My Sad Poem!?
Can things ever be the same!?

Could something that was forever lost somehow be found!?
Even if it was her bracelet of silver that had been buried within the ground!?
Some days the memories hit me like a cool breeze on a dark night
Or like the reflection of lightning on a calm beach front site
We had it all but her mind fooled her into sorrow
She's hoping and praying that I'll give her a tomorrow
I feel like a helpless soldier stranded on Omaha Beach
Hope seems farther away than a man could ever reach
But I look onto the horizon and see a suns ray of shine
I can pick up my gun and run but will things ever be fine!?


This is based on a true story about my girlfriend of 4 years!.!.!.I thought we had it all but she ruined it and I think she is regretting it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm sure she is!.
I know I regret ******* it up with my number one love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The D-Day image stretches a bit, but it's sincere and a very good beginning, the strong bones of a poem still in development!. Put it away for a while and then go back to it!. BOKO!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I ruined my marriage of 7 years and I'm regretting it!.!. my husband could have written this!.!.!.nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com