Please tell me what you think of this?

Question: Please tell me what you think of this!?

Times have changed, lives are made
everything is boring, nothing to say,
motion sickness nothings a thrill,
times of pain, sounds of music,
earthly mess and sculptured greatness!.
points of view, culture club
everything seems to be un stuck
slight of hand open shoelace
open eyed but no place
swollen thoughts where eyes close down,
cant but help to make a sound
body shock, empty shell
inside fright welcome to hell
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8!.5 / 10
amazing
i think im gonna save it if thats okayWww@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it !
you expressed your feeling with great ideas
but it seems that some of your comments didn't really get it
i think maybe it's because they aint livin the same experience as you are
are so many as you
keep on the good work

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WOW THATS GREAT!!
did you make that!?
its awsome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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sorry, dont get it, but love the name!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't get it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com