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Question: Does this make me an oxy-moron!?

So Right, It’s Wrong


Dunces and dames, don't ever dance
Jesters and queens, haven’t a chance

Words of beauty, she releases
I pen pain, from mental diseases

I'm trying to start, my life anew
She does as she, so desires to

She claims to see, me without scar
In her I see, the reasons that are

Soured sad oil, with no way to bind
Sweet flowing water, purity defined

So I sit sadly, facing the sand
She stands over, reaching her hand

I shrug and think, whatever will be
She smiles and says, it will with me

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Uh, where's the 'moron' in 'oxy'!? Ain't none!.

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I thought I had learned the definition of oxy-moron,,, since this does not fit that definition,,, perhaps i was mistaken, though I strongly doubt it

so no, neither you or the poem qualify under the definition I hold in my head

depending on your point of view, that is either good or bad and only you can decide which is rightWww@QuestionHome@Com

You are neither an oxy nor a moron!.
You have a mind that travels down many roads
You have the ability to believe in dreams
You have the words to charm the maidens into believing!.
You have the world at your feet!.!.!.
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Just one thing, you have the title backwards, it should be so wrong, it's right!
A perfect example of opposites attract!.
I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a very 'right' poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why drag the ox into it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one very much!. No oxy-moronic feeling here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And another one! No morons around here!. Like it very very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com