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Question: Can a single tear be so expressive !?
Like finely cut crystal,
a tear shimmers!.
Slowly sliding downward,
barely leaving a telltale trail!.
Eyes sparkling, reflecting,
from moisture glisten!.
Neither a flood nor pair unleashed,
quietly seeps just a single tear,
Subtle, understated, nearly missed,
yet enough, to clearly convey feelings!.
Unguarded eyes, a window unto the soul,
at once expressive, enlightening!.
One small tear perfectly formed,
a single tiny drop, huge with emotion!.
Stunning in it’s simplicity,
powerful in it’s message!.
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One tear and expressed so well it just simply slipped out between the lashes, loved the way you did this! My favorite part even all was so very good, just something about this stanza stuck out to me!
Subtle, understated, nearly missed,
yet enough, to clearly convey feelings!.
Unguarded eyes, a window unto the soul,
at once expressive, enlightening!.
Very poetically put with expressive pen!
Cheers!
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A tear can do so much to kindle
Love, care, emotions not little
Its never-ever comes to stay
But does enough good on its way!.
Tears are beautiful things!. They are the best stress busters ever!.
Your poem is beautiful, i love it!.
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very expressive!. deep!. all that!.!.!.!.!.
lots of talent in your ability to explain such a simple thing and make ppl realize how profound it really is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thank you sir for noticing
and wiping it gently away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not enough, to stain a cheek
So many words, does one tear speakWww@QuestionHome@Com
i thought that was great!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are "tear"ing at my heart strings!.Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com