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My heart aches!.

When I listen, eyes pour and mind just wonders!.
Mind doesn't know why, but eyes spill water!.
It's strange watching body convulse, tighten, flinch, release!.
Fists and swords and knives torment!.
Every time I let heart free, I am shredded!.

I am strapped to the rack and torn to bits
and my eyes clench, and pop, and spill!.

My heart aches like opposite magnets!.
All that is wanted is a one-hundred and eighty degree flip,
liberating tension,
in union!.

First though, I guess,
all the shackles have to be slashed!.

Still mind looks on in wonder!.
As I lay mind aside and let heart unravel, untwist, and spill itself,
something projects, and unleashes itself onto my seismograph body!.
Mind knows not why, and heart never knows!.
Heart just is, and body translates and works out!.

I experience body twist, and writhe, and finally – still!.
finally still
so still
just still

This alchemy is real!.
For when I unleash mind-bound heart,
when I take off the shackles,
rust turns to gold,
turns to platinum,
turns to light!.

And there is clarity!.
And there is light!.


Now though, heart aches!.
And I know,
It's time to unshackle!.
It's time to put mind aside
- and be!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
No suggestions at all!. This one is too good!.
Its like!.!.!. oh my
I seriously love it!.
The first para is lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com