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Question: Is this something even nice!.!.!?
this is the second poem i posted here!.!.please judge this one!.!.

You Left Me Broken


You left me without a singLe word
not even a sign, that your gonNa be bored
then in a wink of an eye
you leave me alone to die!.!.

The pain is kiLLing me
what deEp scars it's gonNa be
I loved you with aLL my heart
how hard it is on my part

I'm trying my aLL to forget you
and I don't even know what to do
forcing myseLf to live without you
now that i know that we're through

My heart is scatTered and in pieces
and you proved me that you're like the rest
You left this heart of mine broken
but i stiLL can't forget you,every now and then!.!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's good, i like it!. You were able to paint the picture enough!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com