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Question: What do you think of my poem about Cupcake!?
I'm 14 and i wrote this short poem!.!.!. I didn't edited it nor think about beautifying it more nor deeply thinking about it!.!.
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Cupcake

Cupcake, so sweet,
A wonderful treat,
I'll give it to you when we meet,
And together we'll eat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Haha very cute poem!


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that is really good! although its not long, that does not make it bad; many short poems seem simple on the outside, but are more deep when you think about it!. Plus, I love the rhyming, it's very good Www@QuestionHome@Com

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sounds yuummy :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! Www@QuestionHome@Com