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Question: Poems!.!.!.!.!. terrible!? !?
I wrote these poems after a guy I dated, that didnt treat me well!. Do you think they have any meaning!? or are decent!? Because when I wrote them I thought they were amazing, but now I think they're TERRIBLE! Maybe its because Im over him!. Anyways!.!.!.
I love, want, need you!.
Cant live without you!.
Always thinkin 'bout you!.
Butterflies when I see you!.
Smile if I hear you!.
Happy when Im around you!.
Cant breath without you!.
Its as simple as that,
I love you!.
You crush me
daily
but make me love you
daily
my heart throbs for you
daily
but you crush me
dailly
so just prove yourself to me
once!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I guess it's true, you rhymes with you!. The poem, not so great!.
Chances are that you don't like it anymore, not because you're over him, but because you're older now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
They are very poor poems, and the grammar is terrible!. The main thing is that they belong to you and they mean something to you about your life!. Keep them safe and they will help you to remember the good times!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
theres potential i see it!
im not much of a poet myself but i see the potential!
nice goin mayne!. keep on tryin ill be checkin ur stuff out
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im new!. check out my new post + older ones too!? gimmie good n bad comments i dont mind i wanna learn!. PEACE Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think they are good poems!. I like the first one alot!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I wasn't to keen on that one keep trying GO GIRLWww@QuestionHome@Com