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Question: Do you like simple love songs!?
Love Song
by C!.S!. Scotkin


I could be your garden’s maze,
Be the early Springtime haze!.
I could be your Summer’s shore
Be the water you love more!.
I could be your Autumn’s glow
Be colors rich before the snow!.
I could be your Winter’s fire
Be the heat chill nights desire
I could be your soft pale dawn
And waken you to sunny morn!.

I will be here when you look,
The final chapter of your book!.




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's lovely and melodic!. A poem that sings to the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My garden's maze,
the springtime haze!.
The summer's shore,
who could want more!?
The autumn's glow,
before the snow!.
My winter fire,
My night desire!.
My soft pale dawn,
out on my lawn!.
I long to look,
You are my book!.

I liked it so well, I tried to plagiarize it!.
But it still pales to your original!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, they should fill the world with simple Love songs,
what's wrong with that, I'd like to know,
"Cause here I go again!.!.!. I love you, I love you
Love doesn't come in a minute,
Sometimes it doesn't come at all,
I only know that when I'm in it,
Love isn't chilly, love isn't silly,
Love isn't silly at all!.

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A gentle violin, soft piano, a wind blown hilltop and a soulful voice singing these words!.!.!.as the last chorus is gently fading, the wind rustles the pages of a book!.!.!.all the pages are full but the last!.!.!.the last are the stanzas of music written by love!.

This is beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Simple love songs, like simple love, speak to a less complicated life where we say what we mean and mean what we say!.

It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all, but it's better still to have loved and not lost!.

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A love letter, pressed to the heart after its first reading!. Then to be read again and again, finally to be set aside but still held; while memories are rekindled, and thoughts of future happenings bring a knowing smile to ones lips!.

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Do I!? You bet I do
This is lovely!.!.!.!.it read absolutely perfectly, each little vignette paints a seasonal picture!.!.!.and it has added depth with the last two lines giving extra oomph (always and forever love!.!.!.you can't beat that)
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Oh yes, definitely do!.
Lucky me I found my love song!Www@QuestionHome@Com

aye, what a delightful poem!.

IB seasons, IB times of day, IB elements,,, fantastic indeed Www@QuestionHome@Com

It finishes very nicely!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes we like simple love songs… wonders what hidden melodies could do to shape the words… sigh… written or spoken… wish we could hear you sing it… Www@QuestionHome@Com

I turned and looked into her eyes
and moved my mouth next to hers
and whispered for the first time
!.!.!.what she needed to hear!.
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Very nice!.!.!.enjoyed totally!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kiss me, you fool! And give the 10 points to Evadne!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It does sing!. "Love's much better the second (or third!?) time around!."Www@QuestionHome@Com