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Question: Could you Tell me How my Poem is (sad)!?
Can things ever be the same!?

Could something that was forever lost somehow be found!?
Even if it was her bracelet of silver that had been buried within the ground!?
Some days the memories hit me like a cool breeze on a dark night
Or like the reflection of lightning on a calm beach front site
We had it all but her mind fooled her into sorrow
She's hoping and praying that I'll give her a tomorrow
I feel like a helpless soldier stranded on Omaha Beach
Hope seems farther away than a man could ever reach
But I look onto the horizon and see a suns ray of shine
I can pick up my gun and run but will things ever be fine!?


This is based on a true story about my girlfriend of 4 years!.!.!.I thought we had it all but she ruined it and I think she is regretting it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"her mind fooled her into sorrow" - I like that line the bestWww@QuestionHome@Com

AMAZING!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could something that was forever lost somehow be found!?

i like that one but who do was lost !?Www@QuestionHome@Com