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Question: Lovely poems about love, i mean crap!?
This is not about me

Incandescent light
nurtured the room
resting peacefully
nestling snugly
Pieces of our life
old and new
united
Finally

“You’re sending that to those poet freaks on YA!?”
“Yea”
“What a bunch of CRAP”
“I know, but they love crap about love!.”
Well tell them to READ THIS!

The floor was glass
And the colored lights beneath
Made it shimmer and glimmer
And dance
As we danced
Under the silver ball
that spun
and caught the light
and threw it back
to the sounds of
SnoopDog!?!?!?!?





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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I was doing great!. I liked it with the humor!.!.!.til u got to SnoopDog!.!.!.sigh!.!.!. Garth Brooks, Eric Clapton, Brian McNight, George Strait, anybody but SnoopDoig!

Can you dance to Tootsie Roll or C'mon Ride That Train!.!.!. Strokin'
ok The Dance, Wonderful Tonight, Close The Door!.!.!. anything but SnoopDog


It was seriously good and special for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Personally, I could have done without the monologue, other than that--I never had a reception for my wedding, but SnoopDog would have been more than welcomed !. !. !. to supply the blunt!. He's a brother of The Steeler Nation--he's got my six!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hah! Let me try:

I stood outside
upon the balcony
with my love
her hair smelled
like springtime
I whispered seductively
"your beauty is boundless,
I want to make love
right here
on this balcony
in front of everyone"
To which my love replied
"Do I know you!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com

That whole middle interlude really drew away from the poem!.!. I am not sure it fit in so nicely!.!.You might want to look at it again!.
Just a thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, it's about you!Www@QuestionHome@Com