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Question: Have you grown tired of all that love crap!?
this is not about me
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the death of a marriage

A state of ruin
seems always to beam
at the end of descending days

Depression forms
as dark shadows grow
like meadows
where once
bright wildflowers wilt

Loneliness hovers
gloom churns in dieing hearts
and burns
through facades
revealing their weakest parts
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Bravo for the subject line alone!. Lets get some whimsical, clever and humorous poems here!.

Nicely done, Dah!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a lovely question!.!.!. I've been venting against that fake "I love you" for 24 hours now!. I think you are born to write and will only get better!.!.!. Nice start you saying !.!.!. this is not about me!.!.!.!. the rest is well said!. I like "gloom churning in dieing hearts" !.!.!. You have got to put the words "love crap" in a future writing!.!.!. cheers

rem: I said "fake" love 'cause all too often it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If that's not about you, then it's about me!.
That first stanza was like going to bed trying to get a good night kiss and that second one was like trying to cuddle in the middle of Summer with the AC off wearing sweat pants--that last one is were I'm at right now!.
I don't know what your looking for in an answer, but mine is: No, I'm not tired of it yet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Juxtaposition of light and dark is exemplary!. I'm an artis, not a poet, but you paint a very bright/dark picture and an astute observation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love crap far over done
Burned beyond recognition
New fresh and true love a thing to hold gently!.
You write a very descriptive poem!. My compliments!

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Because the depressing crap is SO much more fresh and new than the love crap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com