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Question: Does this need help!? The Merge !!?

The Merge

Summer given the
cold shoulder
by the fall then
the winter
Autumn leaves golden
yellow shades of green
Make their way to a colorful sceen
Raked away before the hint of winter
That follows close by

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Summer given a
cold shoulder
by autumn then
winter's chilly brush off

I'm not sure where you are going with the next 5 lines though


No mention of spring !?
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