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Question: I want opinions on my poem!?
This is a poem I wrote when I was younger!. I just want to ask everyone's opinion on it:
"Gentle things are beautiful:
The dove's sweet call,
The soft wind that blows that makes the leaves fall,
Waves and water,
A baby's tender eyes,
A pure green meadow
And a love that never dies!.
And Fierce things are beautiful:
A cheetah on the dash
Lions roaring with teeth that they gnash
The deep roll of thunder
A tiger on the prowl
And in the moon-lite night,
the wolves that howl!."
Please be honest!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a play,
Love is what I feel for you,
Each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is like a song,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when your eyes meet mine,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start!.
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Cut out some words!. In poetry, less is more!. You can cut out a lot of articles (a, an, the)!. also, by rearranging words, you can reduce the number of words and increase the impact!. For example, thunder's roll or wolves' howl!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it's good, it's a real appreciation of the beauty of some of the simplest things in life we sometimes don't reconize!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats so cute
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it is Pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com